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Pjb47's Spider-Woman WIP

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I'm working on your Spider-Woman drawing for you Pjb47, but its quite a challenging image to work on in a lot of ways lol. I tried to ink most of the figure as close to your original pencils as possible, but I did move the mouth down a little bit. And I moved the shadow being cast from her right arm closer to her butt, and gave her more of a butt, because I felt she needed more butt lol.

Because she's hanging sideways on a building, I tried to have her hair falling behind her a little more than you had it, but it's difficult to do that and still have her looking "right". It just looks like her hair is really messed up, or being windblown. You may be able to see the printout of your original pencils under the overlay, with all of those buildings back there lol. Any feedback you can provide would be appreciated.
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wow, just wow. Ayelid, you're really raising the bar here mate! As usual, all the adjustments and changes look awesome. I always did this one hoping to see your Spider-Woman and that's just how it has turned out. I particularly like what you've done with:
1. the hair: it looks more like how it should according to her position. and in any case I like how you do her hair; she's more mysterious, and witch-like. She is Spider-woman after all. I'm not a fan of these clean, sleek, generic versions of heroes where the only difference is the costume.
2. shadows.
3. Butt. :D
4. All changes to face and mask.
5. hands: I wasn't totally happy with the right arm and hand. You've made it look more natural.

good luck with the reflection! I hope it's easier for you than it was for me...